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SMOMy fabulous sentence is- I gazed my eyes while I was looking at my best friend.Here is another oneI flipped over when I hit my head on the hard tolietAnother oneMy friend jumped for joy in the parking lot when she got good news.#16B1
my amazing sentance is...When I was riding the radical waves,I flipped over and my board smacked me in the face!During dance I did a fantastic cartwheel and stuck the landing.
Jcp#17B-1 One beautiful day, I was tiptoing down the dark spookey alley.I stopped to check the time, when BAM, a powerful gun shot whistled right next to my flourished hat. When he shot he hit a sturdy steel wall and deflected back at him. He sprinted and tripped, with a bullet flying at his head he started to ball. It hit him square in the forehead and now he's kicked the bucket but we'll always remember that man who tried to take of my head with a violent bullet.
The bulk biker marched into his motorcycle culb upset with his gang because they left him behind in a fiasco crash.CTBB-16
one time in soccer when I was goalie i hit my head on the hard,cold,wet,post it hurt!!!!!!!!!BCSB1#19
djdb-2#7I fliped into bed when I was tired and I screamed I hate gravity.
DMGB-1#11 I gazed at her beautiful blue eyes shiny bright in the moonlight. He slowly tip-toed on to the rollercoaster with fright. He buckled his seatbelt as tight as he could that there was absolutly no way he could fall out! He stared at the light and it quickly turned from red to green and he was off like a race car. He almost cryed because he was so terifide. Awwwwwww he screamed. Help me!!!!!!!!
TMSB-218The hourse was troting aloung the rode.
MRC B2 #4 I made up these awesome sentences The pencil dazzeled across the paper! :) The dodgeball flew across my face :D
SENTENCE: Matt was furious, so furious that he yanked off his gloves and hurled them towards the fire pit, but Matt was a little too distracted and fell into a pit of quick drying cement! JPMB-1#14 **
My friend Julia flew across the soccer field as she kicked the ball as hard as she could and made a goal!!!!!!!!JHC #6 Block 2
NRSB-2#16Sentance:The teacher was SO angry that she shouted "WHO THREW THAT PAPER AIRPLANE!?"
RTCB-2#9 Pam was so furious about the day before that she slammed her door and screamed "My birthday party was a fisco!"
GRHB3#6My sentence: My eyes gazed upon the beautiful (think i spelled it right...) chocolate bar and I reached for it. Within a few seconds I had inhaled the snack and was on my way.
JNHB3#7Here is a bad sentence:The dog ate the banana.Here is a good sentence:The dog gobbled up the banana.Here is a great sentence:The brown puppy dog chewed up the golden yellow banana like it was a chew toy.
The infuriating watchmen was ressurected from the dead and rushed to his watch tower whitch was incinerated 200 yrs ago and 1 minute after the watchman died.egmb3
tmf4b3This is a sifistacted sentance!My interesting teacher, Mrs. Heim,is a very kind teacher who is AMAZING!!!
MGH#5B3Sally sprinted down the street screaming "I am going to construct a fruit cake with sprinkles!"
JLEB3#3Elija destroyed the cake before the others could get a bite! When the others found out they kicked him out.
2 of my dogs inhale any food they can get.they're about choking after they gobble down their mealsJMK#8
The dogs owner chucked the leftover pizza into the dogs mouth and the dog gobbled it up in 1 bite.JMD#2b-3
BAKB3#9Bad sentence: The cat ate the mouse .Better sentence: The cat dystroyed the mouse like it's life was over!!!
KCLblock-3Bad sentence: the birds ate the worms ?Good sentence:The birds gobbled up the worms!
CPH#13B2This is a mini story :3One day I smacked down onto my bed sobbing. I screamed to the top of my lungs " Grrr! Why is it always me? " My mom stumbled into the room and quitely whispered " Hun, You are the chosen one that's why this is happening." Well the next day a young boy ran his bike into me. I said, " Watch it kid or else the bike won't be the only thing broken."The kid ran off wondering why I was so mad. Well, the time I got to school I saw a young boy squalling. It was the one I kinda bullied. A small tear dripped and splashed on the ground from my face. I walked over to him and got to my knees. His face swelled up with fright. I said, " Listen, I would never hurt you. You were brave to walk away showing no fear. You are amazing. So don't worry. I'm so sorry". Well the little boy got up and held me tight. Well that was an amazing day.Hope you enjoyed my mini story. It took a while to write but it was fun. This is like my writing journal. :)
anwb-2#22Bad:Billy said,"I love you.".Good:Billy shouted at the top of his lungs,"I love you so much!".
JCDBlock 2#8Here are some of my 500 horse power sentences1.The boy hit a homerun and as he flew across the bases he screamed "I did it! I did it!"2.Jacob stomped up to his room and slamed the door and yelled "I hate school!"3.Hailey tiptoed into the kitchen to get a midnight snack, hopeing she wouldnt wake up her parents.4.Kaylee sprinted up the steps and stomped into her sisters room and and ripped up all her notebooks yelling "I hate you!"I hope that u enjoyed reading my sentences.:)
Thomas sprinted down the stair case of the empty subway lot,completely unamare of who or what was fairly close to exterminating him.he wondered what kind of horrible being was pursuing him.He knew finaly that he was doomed when he found he had ran into a dead end.Thomas wanted to scream, but before he could, a scraggly disfigured arm reached out and clung to his shoulder!STAY TUNED FOR MORE STORIES FROM ME!!! :)JPMB-2#14 **