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List Poem B-3High heelsBinderwith sketchesEyes changing color with moodLipgloss waiting to be usedPencil working franticallyBooks hidden in bookbagStickynotes everywhereBracelets hitting tableNailpolish on dresserA nice topEarrings bouncing aroundI.R.W
IRW - You have some nice images here. "books hidden in bookbag" reminds me of you! I'm wondering if you will work on the organization a bit. Look at how you have grouped your items - do you think you should change the order you mention them? Think about it.
List PoemBlonde Hair Hazel Eyes Eyeliner-Coverup-LIPGLOSSPerfectionistWriting & drawingConverse about every dayiPodDocking StationBlack BerryBrick BreakerCrazy-Goofy-Loud LaughterStraight A StudentMGH
MGH - I like the shape of your poem; it kinda helps build a rhythm when you read it out loud.
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My Lifewears black underarmor with a splash of color on his facehes got an image in his head it cureses himhis dad he dont knowhe wishes he did , poor amazing artistgot no memories of a beautiful picturehe can be a geek if he wantedits funny how dark his hair is it kinda matches his eyes like Mrs. Heimyou could tell he is a purple guyall hes got are broken pencils like memories
RKLW - You have some powerful lines in your poem, and they tug at heart. I can't wait to read more of your writing. Do you think you need some punctuation in this piece?
7:31 am still in bedget up beadhead. Dark room muted tv headphones in ear so I could hear music fell asleep 2 minutes into song midnight.Pulling out headphones out of bed feel like dread
EM - I love the lines "get up beadhead" and your final line, "feel like dread". I'm wondering if you're going to work on this piece some more.
My List Poem(:Strawberry blond hairwith strawberry blond bangs falling into eyes.Sometimes green sometimes blue eyes.Dark Blue Abercrombie shirt.A smile from ear to ear.Photos all around my room.An old style radio playing my favorite,Peyton Sanders.Pairs of torn and worn Converse all over my floorMy iPod and phone lighting up every now and then.My journal waiting to be filled with secrets or new songs.And Me. Ready to start off the day.CPH2
List PoemMy phone that is alwase buzzing from a new text The dribbling basketball in my hands for me to controlThe drama that makes my friends slip away out of my handsMy baby blue eyes that sparkle in the sun.The smiles I get when i say "Hi"The flute i play everyday as my fingers mover like lightning makeing a WONDERFUL sound for the world to hear. All these things that make me...ME!