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Friday, February 10, 2012
Wow...we've been working on poems about our life's journey...here is where you can submit your poems. I can't wait to see what you've been working on. Feel free to reply and give stars and wishes to your classmates' poems.
Dusty Road Here I go walking down the dusty road. With my cell phone in my pocket, My saxophone in it’s case. Here I go walking down the dusty road. I have my glasses on my face, I’m ready to walk down the dusty road. Leaving my family Thinking “should I go?” Leaving down the dusty road.
KMM:):):) Block 1 This is my poem that I am working on. Please read it and give me your feedback! My Life, My backpack, a boulder lying on my shoulder As I walk To my life ahead of me. Memories left behind Crazy how life can just pass you by
My hart pounds, races, and runs! No one can stop me now, My pride has taken over! I am ready to fly… HIGH! It’s my time to shine
Where Did the Time Go? Where did the time go? When I was playing outside, In hot summer days with my friends beside me? When I would dribble my basketball on the ground showing people I GOT SKILLS! Where did the time go? Now... Im alone on the path that will lead me to the begining of FOREVER!
With me I have things i need Glasses, Love, Dreams I mean what more do I need? I have my GLASSES on my face so I can see the Bright path in front of me...
I have LOVE so I can help people and help them with OPEN ARMS And to find a GREAT man that I will share my life with FOREVER!
And my dreams? Well, they’re in my heart so I can DREAM A BETTER DAY! Where did the time go?
wow seeing everyone else's poems makes me feel like mine is nothing! But here it is anyway!
My Soul, My Thoughts, My Name
I walk this lonley road alone With my soul, my thoughts, my name My soul reminds me I’m human That I’m alive
I walk this lonley road alone With my soul, my thoughts, my name My thoughts buzz with Anger, confusion, sadness At times they protect, At others they destroy me
I walk this lonley road alone With my soul, my thoughts, my name My name reminds me I’m a person It reminds me who I am On this scary, lonley road
I walk this lonley road alone With my soul, my thoughts, my name. by SJA B2
If I had to go away on an adventure far away I wound bring three special things a bottle of water would be the first to always help me quinch my thirst my second choice the gift of song inside of me I would sing my song so loud and clear so everybody could here spreading happiness, love, and cheer! The third thing I would bring with me my beloved books with titles A through Z. My song my books and my water to help me live through this big big world
My road My road To memories Starts with my shoes carrying me To the place were I long for my memories But faith will be guiding me Through the night and through the day I’ll still be thinking be thinking of The memories that I have saved But I will still be longing And wandering for For my memory lane….
My Quest By: IW On my quest I bring my horse Snowfire protects me He gives me speed when I need And gets me where I am to be
With me I bring a book To guide me through this quest To understand life as we know it I hope to learn a bunch of this It gets me through me frustration It helps me get rid of sadness
Next I bring hope To guide me home when it is time to go To encourage me to never give up To lead me into a man’s arms I hope to see my family again At my journey’s end
WHEN I LEAVE . . . taking one step out my door, this is my chance to start fresh. only 3 things with me and the rest is behind me. courage, strength, memories. todayis a new day tomorrow ive got to go my own way. theres reasons why i bring what i bring, theres reasons for everything. i bring courage for braveness when i meet my fears. i bring strength because my fears can be dangerous. and i bring memories to help get through the tough times ill meet. this is the start of my life journey.
Dusty Road
ReplyDeleteHere I go walking down the dusty road.
With my cell phone in my pocket,
My saxophone in it’s case.
Here I go walking down the dusty road.
I have my glasses on my face,
I’m ready to walk down the dusty road.
Leaving my family
Thinking “should I go?”
Leaving down the dusty road.
KMM:):):)
ReplyDeleteBlock 1
This is my poem that I am working on. Please read it and give me your feedback!
My Life,
My backpack, a boulder lying on my shoulder
As I walk
To my life ahead of me.
Memories left behind
Crazy how life can just pass you by
My hart pounds, races, and runs!
No one can stop me now,
My pride has taken over!
I am ready to fly…
HIGH!
It’s my time to shine
Where Did the Time Go?
ReplyDeleteWhere did the time go?
When I was playing outside, In hot summer days with my friends beside me?
When I would dribble my basketball on the ground showing people
I GOT SKILLS!
Where did the time go?
Now... Im alone on the path that will lead me to the begining of FOREVER!
With me I have things i need
Glasses, Love, Dreams
I mean what more do I need?
I have my GLASSES on my face so I can see the
Bright path in front of me...
I have LOVE so I can help people and help them with
OPEN ARMS
And to find a GREAT man that I will share my life with FOREVER!
And my dreams?
Well, they’re in my heart so I can
DREAM A BETTER DAY!
Where did the time go?
wow seeing everyone else's poems makes me feel like mine is nothing! But here it is anyway!
ReplyDeleteMy Soul, My Thoughts, My Name
I walk this lonley road alone
With my soul, my thoughts, my name
My soul reminds me I’m human
That I’m alive
I walk this lonley road alone
With my soul, my thoughts, my name
My thoughts buzz with
Anger, confusion, sadness
At times they protect,
At others they destroy me
I walk this lonley road alone
With my soul, my thoughts, my name
My name reminds me I’m a person
It reminds me who I am
On this scary, lonley road
I walk this lonley road alone
With my soul, my thoughts, my name.
by SJA B2
EMV B1
ReplyDeletethree important things
If I had to go away on an adventure far away I wound bring three special things
a bottle of water would be the first to always help me quinch my thirst
my second choice
the gift of song
inside of me
I would sing my song
so loud and clear
so everybody could here
spreading happiness, love, and cheer!
The third thing
I would bring with me
my beloved books
with titles A through Z.
My song my books and my water
to help me live through
this big big world
My road
ReplyDeleteMy road
To memories
Starts with my shoes carrying me
To the place were I long for my memories
But faith will be guiding me
Through the night and through the day
I’ll still be thinking be thinking of
The memories that I have saved
But I will still be longing
And wandering for
For my memory lane….
My Quest
ReplyDeleteBy: IW
On my quest I bring my horse
Snowfire protects me
He gives me speed when I need
And gets me where I am to be
With me I bring a book
To guide me through this quest
To understand life as we know it
I hope to learn a bunch of this
It gets me through me frustration
It helps me get rid of sadness
Next I bring hope
To guide me home when it is time to go
To encourage me to never give up
To lead me into a man’s arms
I hope to see my family again
At my journey’s end
These are some
ReplyDeleteOf the thing that
Are coming with me on my
On life journey.
Shoes I can
Run in so I am as
Fast as a fox.so if
I am getting chased by
Other animals I can out run
Them.
Strength I can
Pick up stuff so
I can continue to
Move there for strength
Is as powerful as a car.
Football is as fast
as a cat. Football will
Keep me active
On my life journey.
These are what
I am taking on my
Life journey.
WHEN I LEAVE . . .
ReplyDeletetaking one step out my door,
this is my chance to start fresh.
only 3 things with me and the rest is behind me.
courage,
strength,
memories.
todayis a new day
tomorrow ive got to go my own way.
theres reasons why i bring what i bring,
theres reasons for everything.
i bring courage for braveness when i meet my fears.
i bring strength because my fears can be dangerous.
and i bring memories to help get through the tough times ill meet.
this is the start of my life journey.