Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Writers Helping Writers

Many of you have asked for a place to share your writing and get feedback from your classmates.  I added a page for each block to our blog.  feel free to post your writing.  Know that our posted writing will include drafts - which are works-in-progress - not finished pieces.  Offer stars and wishes so we can help each other grow as writers.  I look forward to reading your work and seeing how you are encouraging each other. 

Mrs. H

8 comments:

  1. SMO
    #16
    B1

    Thank you so much Mrs.H I really really and thankful. I'm so exicited to use it. Thanks so much!!!!

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  2. SMO
    B1
    B#16

    Also I'm confused how you post something on there. Thanks, sorry for all of the questions.

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  3. SMO,
    You can post to these pages now :)

    Mrs. H

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  4. AMH
    #10
    B1
    I am so glad that you put that writing thing up because I like to share writing and just write things so I am so excited.

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  5. Hello my name is Kaylee and I am here today with you to talk about a minor car crash, that happened in Marysville Ohio just last week.
    At the thime a 21 year old named Sara was on her way to the grocery store, and she was texting wile driving.A 32 year old man named john was on his way home from picking his daughter Emily up from dance and getting his son nathen from football pratice. They both where getting off the exit 33 to go in to millvally. Now John was going home and so was Sara. Sara forgot her purse. At the time Sara and John where about to turn and John saw the yellow light. So he slowed down and stoped. And sara was to busy texting she didn’t see John and slamed into him. So that’s all the time we have today see ya next time on NBC 4!!!

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  6. I posted on the link :D I loved this idea. You rock Mrs. H. Blogging is really fun :D
    CPH
    Block 1

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  7. AMD


    Im haveing trouble on my personal narritive so can you help me? This is one of them

    Question
    Have you ever made a mistake? Where they almost scared the liveing daylight out of you? Well my uncle Glenn did this to me and this is what happens.

    Creat mintal picture
    There I was, all by myself with my cousion beside me in king's Island in the dark bysome trees with the wind blowing my hair to one side. We were looking around because we heard our names. My cousin pointed to a figur in the dark. It was my uncle Glenn yelling at us and this is why we were standing there, in the dark with the wind blowing in my hair...

    thanks :D plz say witch one you like best 1 or 2?

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  8. AD...Sorry I have not responded before, but I've enjoyed watching your piece develop. The last time you shared your lead with me, I could tell you had been working on word choice, and showing your reader. Won't it be fun to see how you began this piece and how it ends up? I'm looking forward to seeing your final copy.

    Happy Writing!

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